Peer feedback by Esther

School Magazine Peer Feedback

Are the fonts readable? Are there a maximum of 3 fonts? Have they used a different font for their masthead and their cover lines?

All the fonts are readable and she has only used two but added effects to them.

Is there a clear colour scheme? Is there a sense of branding / House style?There isn’t a clear colour scheme but I like that because it will stand out a lot more from the other magazines.


Is the eye flow natural?
Yes it’s really natural. It really goes  on the lines of the eye flow.


Is the picture believable/well edited?
The picture is quite posed but that’s like any normal magazine – the picture is very well edited


Is the picture suitable for the magazine? (Subject, model, mise-en-scene, costume, props, location)
Yes because its outside of a school but at the same time the way the model is, looks good for a magazine.

Is Spelling Punctuation and Grammar accurate-Are there any typo’s?

No typos whatsoever.


Are coverlines lined up
Not all of it, but most of it.


Are all key elements there (Masthead, dateline, main cover line, other coverlines (kickers+explanatory)
All the key elements.

Is the page on A4 (21cmx29.7cm)
Yes it is.

Other comments

Really not a conventional magazine but that’s what I like about it – it would really stand out.